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eightlines
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Writer of lines, collecting lines to connect minds
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over 8 years ago
(smile)
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over 8 years ago
Ahh, Not a critic, you got me wrong there bro. i simply analysed the poem, i don't know how to critic, I'm just a poet myself. Apropos: i d
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over 8 years ago
Good lines, very good... Verse1, I see a person who derives joy in her responsibilities to someone and not sadness due to usage of words
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over 8 years ago
Hmmm, nice poetry... I observe a rise and fall in intonation and then a sudden rise again on the last line. At first it was a steady rise
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over 8 years ago
i saw the point this poetry was trying to make through the first few lines, on the coronary of a flower. it is mostly the center of attracti
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over 8 years ago
I see wonder through the rise and fall of the ambitious, the rise- the true braveness, the fall an unexpected demise i felt every bit of
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over 8 years ago
Filling out sheets of corrupted pine leaf special brown crusted paper again waiting longing, lonely choking on air from passing trains A
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over 8 years ago
running through a daze i met the earths greatest love and despondent mistake and in my race the world passed me by knowing i'll otherw
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over 8 years ago
Thanks a lot bruw, I'll definitely take to your advice, But what group is discord if i may ask?
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over 8 years ago
Thanks, Doris Adioha I get that you dont know much about poetry. But if you had read my introductory post, you would know then that poetry
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over 8 years ago
Yea i had hoped so. Thanks for keeping that in touch. Here's my first post to that effect.
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over 8 years ago
Thanks a lot. Here's the link
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over 8 years ago
You're highly welcome
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over 8 years ago
thanks. Glad you felt it.
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over 8 years ago
For when love is long gone and enterprise steals the candle with its stand and families hold us in reins and the heart is sold to vain we c
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