10 March 2026 @marinnewest's Freewrite Writing Prompt Day 3038: He Ate What?

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This is my post on #freewriters3038 #dailyprompt he ate what hosted by @marinnewest's.
The humidity in Calabar usually felt like a warm hug, but today, as Adia stood in the middle of Watt Market, it felt like it was choking her. One moment, five-year-old Ekene was tugging at her wrapper, pointing at a pyramid of yellow garri; the next, he was gone, swallowed by the rhythmic surge of the crowd.
​"Ekene!" she screamed, her voice cracking against the cacophony of honking kekes and the rhythmic shouting of "Fine cloth, buy your own!"
​Panic, cold and sharp, pierced her chest. She pushed through the throng, ignoring the indignant grunts of shoppers she jostled. Every small head in a striped shirt looked like his, but every turn brought a stranger’s face. She ran toward the stall where the ukodo—yam and goat meat pepper soup—was steaming, the scent usually his favorite. He wasn't there.
​She spiraled through the meat section, her breath coming in ragged gasps. The vibrant colors of the market—the red of fresh peppers, the green of fluted pumpkin leaves—blurred into a terrifying smear. She reached the fountain at the center, her heart hammering a frantic rhythm against her ribs.
​Then, she heard it. A small, high-pitched giggle.
​Tucked behind a massive stack of plastic basins was Ekene. He wasn't crying. He was sitting on a low stool next to an elderly woman selling roasted plantain. He had a piece of boli in one hand and a blackened fish tail in the other.
​"Mummy, see!" he chirped, mouth smeared with soot and joy.
​Adia collapsed to her knees, pulling him into a crushing embrace. The terror didn't vanish instantly, but as she smelled the woodsmoke on his hair, the world finally stopped spinning.
​Would you like me to expand this into a longer story or perhaps write a scene from the perspective of the woman who found him?



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