Looking Out My Window

almost 9 years ago

The beautiful sunshine,
Adorns the glistening lake, trees and plants,
That move in unison along with the wind.
Such wonderful and marvellous dreams,
Float effortlessly along,
In the open world.
All this I can see,
Yet I’m still not,
A complete part of it.
As I sit alone in my room,
Cut off from the rest of the world,
Looking out my window.

poetry poem writing

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12 comments

@greatdabu 52

almost 9 years ago

Well said. I like this :)

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@jen8 48

almost 9 years ago

Thank you :)

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@positivesteem 69

almost 9 years ago

The beauty of nature is well captured in your poem. I also write poems as well.
Spreading Positivity One Post At A Time

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@jen8 48

almost 9 years ago

Thanks for your feedback! I'll check out your poem and follow your future work.

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@positivesteem 69

almost 9 years ago

Thanks, following you as well.

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@akareem 51

almost 9 years ago

Very beautiful written upvoted
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@jen8 48

almost 9 years ago

Thanks

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@akareem 51

almost 9 years ago

Try visiting my blog sometime if you can .. thanks

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@jen8 48

almost 9 years ago

Yes for sure, you bet!

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@mattbadura 42

almost 9 years ago

I like your poem, all though a bit sad, hope all is well :)

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@jen8 48

almost 9 years ago

Thanks. Yes, this one is a bit sad. That's one of the things that I like about poetry....it lets you express the full range of human emotion and experience.

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@mattbadura 42

almost 9 years ago

I would agree with that :)

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